Allie and the Angray Alien by Emma Ward
Allie Winter is very happy. Today had been the last day of school. She was so happy that she did a handstand. Suddenly she thoght she saw something move in the bushes. She looked at them for a moment until she decided she had imagined it.
Suddenly something jumped out. She sreamed and ran down the road. Looking back she saw that it was .......a dog. She laughed as she stoped and turned around. She said to the dog you scared me. She started to walk home again. The dog followed her! Go home. She said. Woof the dog said. Suddnly she saw movement in the bushes. Did you bring your dog friends. She asked the dog. An alien jumped out of the bushes! She yelled and tried to run but the alien grabbed her and jumped on her and started clawing her back. She elbowed him throwing him off and dazzing him. She took her showlace and tied him to a lamp post.
Because of this he could no longer hurt her.Let me go. I came in peace. i'll let you go when you tell me why you hurt me she said. I am in no rush she added. Okay I will tell you. First of all my name is Bobbie not Alien. Okay she said but why did you hurt me. Don't interrupt Bobbie said. I am from Mars. I came from space. My U.F.O. crashed on this strange planet. What do you call this place? Earth she said. They had a long talk.
Until finally Bobbie said I will tell you why I hurt you. Do you know who that dog belongs to? No. She is my dog and I am very scared of her getting lost. Her name Is Snowball. Thank you for finding her.
As a reward you can have one of her pupies. She has pupies? Yes, I will bring them in a week and as promised bobie appeared in a week with the cutest puppy in the world.
3 comments:
I love your story, Emma. You developed the story well and I loved the ending! I also love you--from Grandma Ward
Great story! Thanks for sharing it!!!
Wow what a great story Emma. You have a wonderful ability to share your thoughts in story form and I suspect you had as much fun writing this as I did reading it! Keep sharing your stories.
Love you grandpa
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